Music video feedback

Below is the feedback from the class when we showed them our music video. The feedback was really useful and I think I could use this to improve my music video in the future.

Really sweet video. Look into transitions and see if you can make it more logical. Balloons could flood into screen?

Some lip syncing is out, nice and cute. Could go to monkey puzzle, balloons could cover up the screen and go crazy. Sort out the blurs.

Good shots, good mise en scene, some looks a bit out of time, is all very happy.

Good theme, innocence goes with song meaning.

Only bad one is it is a little out of sync –other than that it is so cute!

I said I liked the red digipak – but now prefer the yellow to match coat. Lip syncing out. I like the hand held shots of laughing. Clever idea of bucket list.

Excellent shot variety, everything is good, fluent theme. Only think I’d say less of you and Alicia in the same room and position as its bad quality and lessons the quality of the better shots.

Needs more for the drop as too many shots of the balloon scene.

Flows well, lip sync needs to be improved.

Really like the narrative and the fun side of it, but needs colour correction.

Not looking at the camera enough, lots of good costumes and settings. Needs more cuts to the beat. It did use varied shot transitions, cut to music more. More edits needed, you look fun, add some colour correction. Some lip syncing is out.

Love the narrative, bucket list suits the lyrics. Good variety of shots and outfits.

Really liked the flow, try to improve of stediness of the camera.

Needs more locations and wider variety of shots. I like the cute feel.

I like the happy, winter wonderland stuff, not sure about the spoon singing but I get the idea.

Some of the lip syncing was out.

The theme of having fun and being young fits the song. Like the shots on the rides. Include a wider variety of shots – wide/long etc. More editing effects will fit the upbeat song.

Very unstill shots/unfinished.

I really like the idea behind the video and is enjoyable to watch, however the shots were a little shaky at times when it wasn’t a go pro and at times the lip-syncing was a little out.

Footage is really varied, lots of good locations. Minimal editing, more would be good. Could use more interesting transitions.