Website feedback

Below is the feedback which I received from the class from my website. There is some good feedback, which can definitely be used to improve my website in the future. I will try to take the feedback to my advantage to get the best possible grade.

 

The home screen having a little bit of everything is really nice way to get straight into the action but it can be seen that some text hasn’t been written yet for tour info and that album covers and track list yet to be put in. Also the social media buttons at the bottom of the screen don’t actually go to the artist’s social media accounts. The tour dates don’t actually make sense, hoping around the moths going backwards and forwards in time. The gallery obviously needs updating with another photoshoot from the artist, also take out the selfies they don’t make you look professional. Also pressing the “show more” tab on the gallery opens up a load of random stock images from wix; would maybe remove this. I think the bio is too long, when I initially saw it I thought “God do I have to read all that” if there is that much there cannot be concise info on the artist, I just need to know who I am looking at and where she came from and what she aims to be. The shop needs to be assessed and actually worked upon with the creation of some products and the removal of the filler that the website creator has given. Also would move the basket button to be within the navigation bar. The font of text used is really nice, clean and sharp. The artists brand is coming through, I actually really like the geometric shapes in the background even if they are wix’s. I think the artists style is coming across with it. Would maybe think about using a different image of the artist at the top of each new page.

 

– With the gallery, add some more variety in photos. Maybe dedicate a day for photo-shoot to boost up this gallery. Maybe you could use these photos to use on merchandise that you need to finish.

 

AVA – First page needs completing otherwise looks very good. Gallery all the same, different outfits. Music page needs adding to as it is empty. Bio is a bit too long, wouldn’t want to read all of it. ‘Shop’ heading in lower case the rest are all CAPITALS. 6-10 Ben Griffiths

 

Really like the picture used on the home page. I like the shapes on the side of the website but think they should go all the way down. The links are a bit confusing as it doesn’t look as if the page has changed when you click on a new link. The gallery page is good but need a wider variety of photos and outfits. The bio is good and detailed but a bit plain. Overall I like the colour scheme and think website is good. Ella O

 

Nice front cover. Don’t know why there gallery goes to black and white of tattoos from nice and colourful photos? All dates should be clear, bit confused by all this. Only 4 tracks on album and they’re all named track 1-4. Nice merchandise page. The colours flow well throughout the website. A lot of scrolling due to photo being on every page.

 

Photos look good but the background is weird and don’t know what the random shapes are about, they don’t match the artist. Good clear navigation bar which stands out. It is a bit samey samey and there isn’t much of a variety of photos or text. Needs some more interaction. Needs more colour. Bio is good nice to read lots of information about the background of an artist, comes across as a professional artist. I think it needs to be a bit more edgy seems very simple and girly. Shop has a different font to the others on the bar and needs to be changed to capitals. Merchandise needs to be done but overall interesting.

 

I like all the pictures you have used and the block black bars you have used in the design. You have all the needed links and the overall look of the website is really nice. Although the whole website is unfinished with no actual text. So the website needs to be finished. Level 2- 4/10

 

I like the simple background Easy navigation – everything looks neat Need to change default captions on Tour page Think header image should change for every page Bio page too long – add images Level 3 – 8 By Angel

 

- Tour section isn’t complete, Merchandise are overpriced, Gallery is very limited, I like the bio as it is very descriptive

 

6- The background is very simple but is very effective, on tour dates, need to remove the paragraphs and write information about the tour and Need your music video on the song page because is currently blank.

 

all pictures look the same, like the fonts, colours a bit boring, no info under the tours, lot on bio, no personalised merchandise. 6/10

 

6 - The front page looks good and the colour scheme works well with the artist. Edit tour information. A lot of bio. Update the shop. By Charlie

 

The website if quite unfinished, the home page needs the album with the track list and you need to write information in the touring sections. I like the layout of the home page as there is music, pictures and news. The links to buy tickets need to go to somewhere like ticketmaster. On the gallery there are still default images and all the photos look very similar. There needs to be a variety of outfits and locations to make it interesting. I don’t really know if the long biography is necessary as it feels more of a Wikipedia page or article, it needs to be more personal. There is no merchandise. Rating 5/10.

 

I like how there is a scroll on the galley – however more pictures need to be added. Paragraph and links need to be added on tour. Music link needs completing. Maybe cut down the bio on the bio link as its quite long. Merchandise needs to be added. No social media links. Overall id mark the website a 5. Kelsey

 

like the modern twist on the website, really suits the genre of the artist. Gallery shuld include all different photos not all the same outfit. Music front cover could be on the music link. Low level 3

 

I think you need some more pictures with a different outfit on. I think that you should get rid of the picture names aswell. eg. arms up no smile pt 2. I like the background. Need to add song titles to album list. Need to put your logo on the merchandise.

 

need more variety of pictures in gallery, music&contact&shop needs updating, biography is good and thorough, maybe the header picture could change on each page? - 4/10 Level 2

 

Really good website, the images look good and effective - represent the artist and highlights the synergy with the colour scheme! The navigation is also easy, however i would add more images, as there is only one image, so looks dull (Level 2)

 

Level 2 - The same picture is the whole way through - want to see different shots to make it more interesting.