Feedback given by Mrs Brookes, for our music video so far:
- Tweek some of the lip sync
- Colour and contrast needs to be tweeked in some areas - especially San Fran shots
- Performance good but get some different sized shots
- Don't understand the bus shots
- Love the shot on the swing
- Wonder if you could be together in some of the shots, because otherwise see no connection. Maybe could be a sleepover or there could be some sort of friendly break up
- Many more fun shots, should the performance be serious and the narrative be fun?
Contrast between the performance and the narrative in the colours